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As I was saying in Graz….

12/9/2017

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It was a delight to present at the Plain Language Association International (PLAIN) conference in Graz, Austria in September.
Here’s my presentation focusing on the need for scientists to talk to the general public about their work and why plain language helps them do just that.

My background ranges from daily newspaper reporter and editor, to Deputy Press Secretary for a U.S. Senator, to public affairs officer for the research office of a US science agency, to now. While I was at the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration, the Plain Writing Act of 2010 was signed. I became a plain language trainer.
I was using plain language in my previous jobs and always worked with NOAA scientists to refine and clarify their work so I could understand it and explain it to the members of the media with whom I worked. The Plain Writing Act gave me another reinforcement to work with scientists.
Plain language helps scientists improve the relationships with their customers – those who need data to help make policy or personal decisions. Scientists should spend almost as much time talking about their research as they do conducting it.
But some are better at it and want to do it, others either aren’t good or don’t want to do it. We need to concentrate on those who see the value and want to improve their skills.
Those of us in communication work hard to ensure that information shared with the public is clear, concise, and relevant.
But scientists tend to look at the big picture – global effects, where as the general public wants local information – will it rain in my neighborhood tomorrow.  How we find that happy medium is often left to the science communicators.  We know how the science works and we know how to share that with the general public.
But many people – especially the media – don’t want to talk to people like me – the communicator. Rightly so, they want to hear right from the source – the scientists. The people out there in the field, taking the measurements and collecting the data.
Scientists have been reluctant to talk about their work beyond scientific conferences. And some are convinced that when addressing general audiences it is enough to present findings.
For instance - a major international report was coming out on an ocean issue. We had arranged a teleconference with media from major US and international outlets to talk to four of the report’s major authors. One of the scientists was asked a question and responded in very accurate, but scientific terms. I wasn’t in the room with the scientist, but my heart sank. The reporter asked for a follow-up question. As the teleconference moderator, I agreed.
“Dr. X,” she said. “Can you please tell us what Dr. Y just said?”  Dr. X answered clearly and Dr. Y became one of my most ardent advocates of my plain language training.
In many countries, doubters who have the megaphone of social media to amplify their message use it to marginalize science. “Merchants of Doubt” by Naomi Oreskes and Erik Conway (2010) does a masterful job of showing how industries such as tobacco and oil have pumped millions of dollars into dubious science and perpetuating doubt into science dealing with the dangers of a chemical, tobacco smoke, acid rain, and climate change.  We recently learned that Exxon/ Mobil spent almost as much in sowing doubt as it did funding science showing the effects of its product on climate change.
According to a Harvard study released in August that looked at 187 public and private Exxon/Mobile documents from 1977 to 2014 -
            “About 80% of Exxon's internal documents that were examined acknowledged that climate change is both real and human-caused, compared with just 12% of advertorials published in the op-ed pages of the Times. Doubt was expressed by 81% of Exxon's advertorials.” -
So what do we do? It does come down to us – the general public.  As an American, I am deeply disturbed that so many of my countrymen and women have such disdain for science. Many of the people affected by the recent hurricanes in Houston and Florida still do not accept scientific data. 
I applaud the efforts of the international community to continue forging ahead, sadly, with little or no US participation.
But I am hopeful. I see younger scientists seeing the need to talk about their work to others. I see a growth in the field of science communication, with many professional organizations either starting or expanding their science communication efforts for their members.
I see scientists and non-scientists – like the actor Alan Alda – finding ways to reach people in non-traditional way.
Alan Alda, who now has a Center for Science Communication in New York named for him, always loved science. You may recall he played a surgeon in the long-running program M*A*S*H. His new book is “If I Understood You, Would I Have This Look on My Face?” outlining his adventure in the art and science of relating and communicating.
During a visit to an observatory in Chile he had to have emergency surgery. The doctor was not only a good medical professional, but also a good science communicator. He explained to Alda that he had to remove the bad parts of his intestine and reconnect the good ends. Without missing a beat, Alda said, “Oh, you did an anastomosis – that’s one of the first surgeries we did on M*A*S*H.”
While the story is amusing, it’s memorable, which brings us to one of the many techniques that scientists can use when sharing their work. Storytelling.
People tend to remember information told in stories much better than if they read, heard, or saw the information in text. Here’s what I tell scientists if they want to learn how to use storytelling.
Storytelling also forces scientists to empathize with their audiences and find some common values.  While some people refuse to talk about climate change, they may sincerely want to know what causes hurricanes, or why sea levels are rising. They don’t make the connection and talking about specifics could eventually bring them to the larger topic.
If you were at PLAIN’s last conference in Dublin, you may have heard Dr. Deborah Bosley talk about empathy. Many scientists are accused of just interested in numbers and charts and have little or no understanding of the feelings of others. Using plain language helps scientists talk to people like they really talk to other people.
Few scientists use their scientific language when talking to family members or friends and neighbors. But getting them to think about talking about their work to other audiences in the same way is often met with the phrase “dumbing down.”  I dislike that phrase a lot, because it is often harder to make things simple and to make them complicated. Susan Joy Hassol, a pioneer of science communication, takes another view. She calls it “smartening up” and I agree.
Hassol and her colleague Richard C. J. Sommerville also developed a guide to help translate scientific terms into those the general public would understand. I expect this guide would work well in any language. I use this in my training as an exercise.
My background is in newspapers. I still start my day with coffee and a real newspaper – either The New York Times or the Washington Post. We get both delivered to our home daily. But while traveling, if a paper isn’t available, I do read on whatever device is handy.
Newspapers used to be the main source of reliable information in many houses. That’s not the case in many places today. Newspapers also had science writers - people whose “beat” was science. Few papers have a real science writer, let alone writers, who concentrate on science. Some science pages were renamed and now focus on health or wellness, but few have the resources to bring science into our homes.
The New York Times is fortunate to have a stable of excellent science writers – Justin Gillis being one of them. In a piece on climate change he published Monday, he notes that the scientists weren’t listened to decades ago. I quote:
            “Scientists urged decades ago that we buy ourselves some insurance by cutting emissions. We yawned. Even today, when millions of people have awakened to the danger, tens of millions have not. So the political demand for change is still too weak to overcome the entrenched interests that want to block it.”
He also notes in this piece – which is the last he will write for a while while he takes time off to write a book – that our climate is changing because of us and it is up to us to do something about it.
            “Because of atmospheric emissions from human activity, the ocean waters from which (Hurricane) Harvey drew its final burst of strength were much warmer than they ought to have been, most likely contributing to the intensity of the deluge. If the forecasts from our scientists are anywhere close to right, we have seen nothing yet.”
Scientists with whom I have had the pleasure to work with for many years often reminded me that “we may be too conservative on our projections” of what may happen with our changing climate. We must not be complacent sea level rise is expected to rise a certain amount – it could be much higher.
Today, scientists are in the spotlight, as many politicians challenge accepted scientific consensus on critical issues, This puts critical international agreements – based on science in danger, such as such as the Paris Agreement, within the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change dealing with greenhouse gases emissions mitigation, adaptation and finance starting in the year 2020.  
Science is a service to society. The better scientists can convey this message, the better off we all will be.
Thank you.

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Plain language supports science communication

10/11/2017

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This is a post by my talented colleague Kate Goggin from NOAA. This post originally appeared on the Center for Plain Language site.

October 11, 2017

Rescued sea turtle covered in Deepwater Horizon oil in 2010
(NOAA photo by T. Hirama, Florida Fish and Wildlife Conservation Commission)I love helping scientists translate tech talk into plain language. Often the editing process goes smoothly, but sometimes, they have reservations. The fears I hear most often involve dumbing down the information, or, oversimplifying it. “Those are common complaints,” says Dr. Lisa DiPinto, Senior Scientist at the National Oceanographic and Atmospheric Administration, and one of my colleagues, in the Office of Response and Restoration. “Scientists have legitimate concerns about plain language editing. Will some important detail get lost in translation, or get left out?”
Communicating science to the public
Luckily, Dr. DiPinto embraces plain language writing and editing, and she believes it helps connect the public to science. “That is a core value that was instilled in me by my professors. I am in the applied science field, and we’ve got to be able to communicate outside of academic circles. It is always on my agenda, even when I am planning a project from the beginning.”
Her projects require a lot of public attention. For example, she was the chief scientist who investigated the environmental damage caused by the 2010 Deepwater Horizon oil spill. Noted as the largest offshore oil spill in U.S. history, she led a scientific team that:
  • made more than 20,000 trips to the field
  • obtained over 100,000 environmental samples
  • and therefore, created more than 15 million records.
The massive data collection, and subsequent series of scientific studies, documented the largest natural resources damage assessment ever conducted. The resulting report, titled, the Final Programmatic Damage Assessment and Restoration Plan and Final Programmatic Environmental Impact Statement, formed the basis of the Nation’s largest civil settlement — $8.8 billion — reached with BP America.
A Mountain of Facts
To achieve these historic milestones, that report had to be scientifically sound and legally defensible. The document spanned 1,659 pages and weighed approximately 15 pounds. While it is possible someone actually read every page, chances are better that people actually read the plain language overview instead.
An army of scientists and an army of editing staff from Eastern Research Group, Inc. created the 54-page overview. “We knew we had to communicate our findings to the public, lawyers, and judges, so it quickly became a valuable tool,” said Dr. DiPinto.
Some of the plain language methods employed include use of headings and subheadings, active voice, lists, and tables. Additionally, they inserted compelling photos, infographics, and call out boxes to convey information and to break up the text. Another effective technique incorporated the use of concrete familiar words, especially when describing the scope and scale of the spill.  
Deepwater Horizon by the numbers
  • 3.19 million barrels (134 million gallons) of oil released into the ocean.
  • 15,300 square miles: the maximum extent of the oil slick on a single day (June 19, 2010)—an area 10 times the size of Rhode Island.
  • 43,300 square miles: cumulative extent of the surface slick during the course of the spill—an area approximately equal to the size of Virginia.
  • At least 1,300 miles of shoreline fouled by oil—more than the distance by road from New Orleans to New York City.
Restoration of the Gulf is an ongoing process, so the document is widely distributed at public meetings, and it also provides valuable context for the media who still devote a lot of time to this story.
Since I arrived at NOAA after the incident, I consider it my Bible for Deepwater Horizon information. I reference it daily, and it makes a great case study when convincing reluctant scientists to use plain language techniques.
Disclaimer: The contents of this blog are mine personally and do not necessarily reflect any position of NOAA.

About the Author: Kate Goggin, Environmental Communications Specialist for NOAA’s Office of Response and Restoration, has worked in outreach and public affairs for several federal agencies including the U.S. State Department and the Bureau of Reclamation at the U.S. Department of the Interior. She holds a degree in Communications Consulting from George Mason University and currently serves as a media liaison with the NOAA Communications Office.
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Abstract advice for scientists

6/16/2017

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Most scientific journals require an abstract - an explanatory paragraph or two - to briefly explain the topic and scope of work that is explained in great detail in the body of the paper. The abstracts are often written in the same scientific language as the rest of the paper.
But more journals request a plain language abstract. Writing your abstract in plain language is a good exercise to help share your work with those of us outside of your field.
Here are some things to think about when writing a plain language abstract:
-- You are not "dumbing it down" - in fact, you are making it clearer and easier for others to understand.
-- You won't just replace long words with short ones - although that is much better; to make things clear, you may need more words.
-- Use a storytelling technique in your abstract - was your work a surprise? a mystery? a drama? a new use of technology? a problem solved? a new problem discovered?
-- Read it out loud to a family member or a friend: Do they get it?
-- Is there a key message?

Science is fascinating and important. It helps us understand how our world works and how humans fit in. We need scientists to help us understand.

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Listen up!

1/14/2015

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People will remember what you say when you talk normally - no long words or fancy speech - just conversationally. There are some excellent examples in this piece from Printwand.


Who are you more likely to listen to: a scholarly lecturer giving a ponderous speech, or a close friend animatedly telling a story? Naturally, you’d prefer the person who talks more conversationally; that same principle applies to marketing and business writing.

People pay extra attention to a message written in a conversational tone. In fact, according to a study by psychology researchers Richard E. Mayer and Roxana Moreno, when people read something that’s written conversationally, it tricks their brain into thinking they’re directly involved.

As a result, a conversational tone is more effective for getting a message across–and getting that message to stick. Unfortunately, it can be hard to find your voice when writing informally. In school, you were taught to write in a strictly formal style; that’s a tough habit to break. Informal business writing might be a grammatical nightmare, but it’s an excellent way to build trust and attract customers.

Here are a few ways to make your writing sound less like a textbook and more like a natural conversation.

  1. Record yourself talking Record a conversation between you and a friend, then try to transcribe it. When you take spoken language and try to transfer it to written word, you’ll have a better understanding of the ways we play with language to get our point across.

    Pay attention to how the other speaker talks as well and how they react to what you’re saying. Do you confuse the other person with the way you order your words? Do you use too much regional slang? This will give you a better understanding on how your audience will react to your conversational copy.

    For even more practice, check out some play scripts and screenplays at your local library and study the dialogue.

  2. Use contractions We speak with contractions because it helps us get our words out faster, so write with contractions to sound more conversational. You’ll also save space in your media by not having to spell out every single word.

    This sentence sounds pretty unnatural when you say it out loud:

    Do not wait! Our special sale will not last for long!

    It almost sounds like something a robot would say. Let’s add some contractions:

    Don’t wait! Our special sale won’t last for long!

    This sounds much more like something you would actually say to someone.


  3. Shorter sentences Speaking requires breaks for breathing, so your sentences should be short–ideally less than 35 words. Shorter sentences also make it easier for your audience to quickly scan for information.

    Break up your longer sentences using ellipses, commas and semicolons to visually separate ideas and increase scannability. If your sentence contains two or more complete thoughts, then use a period to chop it up into smaller full sentences.

    When we speak we don’t necessarily worry about sentence length or completeness. Add some sentence fragments to your copy to mimic natural conversation. For instance:

    Who wants to come home to a dirty house? No thanks! Call Sunny Maid Service Today!

  4. Start sentences with “and” or “but” This may go against everything your English teacher taught you, but it’s okay to start a sentence with “and” or “but.” We do it all the time when we’re talking and we think of a new point to bring up when our old point is finished.

    Starting a sentence with “and” or “but” lets that sentence stand out from the others while still carrying over the thought from a previous sentence. It also allows for shorter, scannable sentences.

    We can get the stain out of your shirt whether it’s from coffee, ink or even blood. And that’s a guarantee!

    This print ad (written from the point of view of the meal itself) includes sentence fragments beginning with the word “and.” Photo Credit: TunnelBravo

  5. End with prepositions It’s a common myth that ending a sentence with a preposition (such as “on,” “in,” or “of”) is grammatically incorrect. In fact, this is a great way to make your writing sound more conversational. Not only do we talk this way, it may actually help keep your writing in the active voice.

    Here’s a sentence in active voice that ends with a preposition:

    We’ll build a new backyard garden that you can be proud of.

    Conversely, this next sentence doesn’t end with a preposition, but it’s in passive voice and sounds pretty awkward:

    You can be proud of the new backyard garden we’ll build.

  6. Use common words Conversational writing shouldn’t be loaded up with jargon or overly complex terms (unless you’re specially targeting an audience that understands them). Instead, you should focus on using common words and expressions found in everyday conversation. For instance, “Our flowers look beautiful” can be understood by everybody, while “Our flora look resplendent” is a little too wordy.

    Keep your words at three syllables or less whenever possible, since we naturally try to use shorter words when we speak.

    This sentence doesn’t roll off the tongue and sounds pretty stuffy:

    We’ll make your ceremony look magnificent.

    Here’s a more conversational and personable alternative:

    We’ll make your wedding look lovely.

  7. Incorporate slang Depending on your product, mild profanity like “hell” might help appeal to your audience.

    We identify with one another through our use of slang–kids have slang words that adults don’t understand and vice versa. Adding slang to your copy will make you sound more authentic, especially if it’s slang that your target audience recognizes.

    The occasional naughty word can even be effective, but only use them in extremely rare cases and with the least offensive words possible. “Our sauce is hot as hell!” paints a vivid picture without being too vulgar. Hot sauce is marketed to adults, so the audience wouldn’t be offended by this mild swear word.

    It’s important that your slang is accessible to your target audience. Don’t use out-of-date slang or words that only makes sense to a particular group unless you’re targeting that group specifically. For example, “cool” has been a slang term for such a long time that everybody knows what it means. “Keen,” on the other hand, is an out-of-date term.

  8. Ask questions You know what really helps your copy sound conversational? Asking a hypothetical question. It makes the reader feels more engaged because you’re speaking directly to them and giving them something to actively figure out on their own.

    It can be helpful to immediately follow-up your questions with an answer so that the reader doesn’t have time to think of the wrong answer. For example:

    Where’s the best place to get quality, organic produce? Just down the street at Green Market Whole Foods.

    Similarly, this ad promoting a rugged, no-nonsense gym uses a hypothetical question to appeal to its audience, turning a potential flaw into a positive.


  9. Write with an active voice We talk with an active voice because it’s the easiest way to organize our thoughts. Writing in active voice means the subject of the sentence is the thing performing the action.

    Passive voice is the opposite, when the subject is the thing being performed upon. We don’t usually talk in passive voice because it sounds unnatural to the ear.

    This passive voice sentence sounds awkward when spoken out loud:

    The place where you can get the best deal on your tires is Jacobs Automotive.

    Instead, it should be written using the active voice:

    Jacobs Automotive can give you the best deal on your tires.

  10. Use examples, similes and metaphors We add examples and metaphors to our speech to make complex ideas easier to understand. Write with examples, similes and metaphors to not only sound more conversational, but to strengthen your message.

    For example, saying “We’re dependable” is okay on its own, but try adding a simile.

    We’re dependable, like the best friend you can call after midnight.

    This gives the audience something they can relate to from their own lives to associate with the message. Similarly, the ad below appeals to inventors by using a famous example (Ben Franklin).


  11. Write like you’re telling a story to a friend Communication is essentially storytelling. Frame your copy the same way you would frame a story to a friend. Pretend like you’re trying to tell them something in an e-mail, where writing is less formal and more conversational.

    The best stories have a clear message, moral or call to action. If you told your friend a story about something that happened at work, your end result would be to garner a reaction–perhaps to have your friend sympathize with you or give you advice.

    Take those principles of communication and apply them to you copy. How would you tell a story to your friend if you wanted to convince him to try a new product or service?

  12. Speak to the reader in first/second person Formal writing is always written in third person, but conversations take place using the first and second person pronouns. First person pronouns make your brand seem more personable and second person pronouns engage the audience, bringing them into the message.

    Use plural first person pronouns to represent your brand; for example, “We’re the best in the business” and “Our representatives are happy to assist.”

    However, if your brand is just one person, then using a plural pronoun will make your copy sound like British royalty. In that case, you want to use singular pronouns, such as:

    I have twenty years of experience in professional photography.

    Second person pronouns are always singular except for certain slang terms like “ya’ll.” This makes it easier to reach a wide audience while still making it sound like you’re having a personal conversation with each one. Sentences like “You won’t find a better deal” and “Your home is in good hands” could apply to both individuals and broad groups of people.


  13. Write to your target audience If you have identified your target audience, you should have a better understanding of the appropriate conversational tone that will relate to that audience. After all, having a conversation with your best friend is much different than talking to your grandma.

    For example, if you’re targeting a specific area, your copy should include elements of the local lingo. A take-out menu from the Midwest would advertise its “Ice Cold Pop” instead of “Ice Cold Soda,” while an ad in the South might use a tone of voice more tailored for that region.


  14. Don’t go overboard Real conversation can be downright inefficient sometimes. We start sentences that we never finish, go off on unrelated side-tangents and use empty filler words such as “like.” As such, your writing should only mimic conversation, not replicate it exactly.

    Conversational tone isn’t appropriate for every situation either. Depending on your audience, brand or product, you may not want to be too informal. Some pieces of copy, like a legal disclaimer, require a formal tone by default. A funeral home should be conversationally sympathetic, but avoid using slang and humor.

  15. Read everything out loud When you’re done writing your copy, read it out loud–preferably with an audience. Pay attention to the places where you have to stop and take a breath. These are places where you could probably do with shorter words and sentences.

    Make note of any section that sounds awkward or feels like a tongue twister to say. Clean up these areas of your copy so they’re clearer.

Conclusion Don’t panic if you don’t start immediately start writing conversationally–it takes practice to get it right. However, it’s important to track your progress over time to see how your audience responds to your style. And when you speak to your new customers, if any of them say “You sound just like you do in the brochure,” you’ll know you’re on the right track.


- See more at: http://www.printwand.com/blog/15-tips-for-writing-in-a-conversational-tone#sthash.XyiT5PLM.dpuf

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Plain talk for scientists

1/8/2015

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Thanks again to my great panel members - John Calderazzo (center) and Gifford Wong -- and to the more than 110 participants in our session on Sharing Science in Plain English, Dec. 18, at the Fall Meeting of the American Geophysical Union. Thanks, too, to Mary Catherine Adams at AGU for bringing us all together. (Photo: Mary Catherine Adams/AGU)
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Plain 'dumbing down'?

5/6/2014

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This blog by Center for Plain Language Board Member Brian Berkenstock tackles an issue we hear all of the time about plain language.
Blog Dealing with the “dumb down” dinosaur, or how to enlighten the ignorant without losing your job. It continues to shock me that in the year 2014 I still hear people say, “Oh, you want to dumb down my writing” when the subject of plain language comes up.

My reaction is

a. A long, exasperated sigh or

b. A clenching of jaw and fists.

My response depends on my mood.

I hope I’m wrong, but I imagine you may face archaic thinking like this in your world. These “dumb down” dinosaurs are everywhere — the halls of academia, the private sector, government.

If I’m having a rare, at-the-end-of-my-rope kind of day, something regretful may slip out, like, “The only dumb thing is to keep writing as poorly as you do.” (I do not recommend this approach.)

On slightly better days, I talk to these folks like a teacher addressing a slow student — with a broad smile and lots of encouraging head nods: “No, Billy, plain language doesn’t dumb down anything. It makes reading easier and faster. And not just for weak readers. Research shows that busy, smart people prefer simple and clear language, too.”

Then there are the days when I do it right. When I feel proud of myself for not being snarky. Days when I stay positive. When I remember that it’s not their fault that they don’t know what we know.

Spreading the gospel of plain language works best with sincerity.

So on those good days, I talk about the volumes of research that support the use of plain language. And I let people know that Europe, Canada, Australia and New Zealand are about a decade ahead of the U.S. in their thinking around plain language. (This gets competitive types worked up.) Finally, I remind people that readers have more options today than ever before. Readers can easily find whatever we’re offering somewhere else, so if we do a poor job communicating, we will surely lose them.

If all my efforts fail to enlighten someone to the value of plain language, I take solace in the fact that their anti-plain language views, like the dinosaurs, will one day go extinct.

About the author: Brian Berkenstock is a Center for Plain Language Board Member, and a Senior Communications Consultant at Aetna.
Learn more about Brian 

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Plainly 2014

1/1/2014

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 In addition to losing weight, saving money, and winning the lottery, one of your New Year’s resolutions may be to write and speak in plain language.

For some, losing weight, saving money, or winning the lottery may be easier. But help is at hand thanks to the federal government’s Plain language site: http://www.plainlanguage.gov/

For instance, there’s a nifty one-page poster courtesy of the Census Bureau that gives 10 steps to plain writing with examples, such as “Use everyday phrases and words,” “Define uncommon terms,” and my favorite, “Proofread.”

The poster “Why Use Plain Language?” also provides a brief list of words and the plain language substitutes – such as “try” instead of “attempt” and “use” to replace the militaristic-sounding “utilize.” For more examples, go to: http://go.usa.gov/G2o

The poster is one of many free resources available on this site. Free training is available to federal offices. There are independent plain language trainers – such as Press Here – who offer training to the private and non-profit sectors.

If you want to arrange training through Press Here, please send us a message at [email protected].


And a Happy New Year to you all!

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Salute to Safire

11/1/2013

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William Safire loved language. His weekly columns “On Language” delved into the quirky and the mundane aspects of how we write and speak. As a speechwriter to President Richard Nixon Safire is credited with creating the memorable phrases “nattering nabobs of negativism,” and “hopeless, hysterical hypochondriacs of history,” according to his Sept. 27, 2009 obituary in The New York Times.

Author of many books, including collections of his essays on language, Safire is also remembered for his “Rules for Writers,” some of which appear below and in my book, are essential for any writer to have posted in view of his or her computer or typewriter.

  • Remember to never split an infinitive.
  • The passive voice should never be used.
  • Do not put statements in the negative form.
  • Proofread carefully to see if you words out.
  • If you reread your work, you can find on rereading a great deal of repetition can be by rereading and editing.
  • And don't start a sentence with a conjunction. (Remember, too, a preposition is a terrible word to end a sentence with.)
  • Don't overuse exclamation marks!!
  • Place pronouns as close as possible, especially in long sentences, as of 10 or more words, to their antecedents.
  • Writing carefully, dangling participles must be avoided.
  • If any word is improper at the end of a sentence, a linking verb is.
  • Take the bull by the hand and avoid mixing metaphors.
  • Avoid trendy locutions that sound flaky.
  • Everyone should be careful to use a singular pronoun with singular nouns in their writing.
  • Always pick on the correct idiom.
  • The adverb always follows the verb.
  • Last but not least, avoid cliches like the plague; seek viable alternatives.
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This is just crazy enough to work.....

10/24/2013

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After leaving a great job as a public affairs officer at NOAA (the National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration) at the end of March 2013, I knew I wouldn't be happy unless I could combine my love of writing and words with the joy of working with scientists and reporters.
That's how Press Here came to be.
I have been fortunate, nay, damn lucky, to work with and learn from some of the best science writers and the best scientists. The stories I like are the quirky and offbeat, which should be no surprise to anyone who has spent more than 10 minutes talking to me.
At NOAA, I was cheered by the response to a monthly column about language I wrote for the NOAA Communicator. Readers were very kind in their praise but also very quick and correct to let me know when I made a mistake.
I hope that this blog can continue that relationship between writer and reader.
And I hope that Press Here will gain the respect of the two fields it serves - science and media.
As the title of this entry says -- it's just crazy enough to work.
cheers
jana
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    A former daily newspaper reporter and editor, a deputy press secretary, and now a science communication and media maven.

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